Saturday, January 26, 2008

Torture

In your sparkling eyes
Shallow oceans full of scorn
Drowning me within.



Haiku in collaboration with The Psycho Guy.

2 comments:

Até said...

"Shallow"? Yet "drowning"?

Dunno. Interesting. Shall get back to you on this one.

Lúthien Táralóm said...

Yes... the oxymoron was the point... Awaiting to hear what you think. :)