Saturday, November 04, 2006

As the thoughts flow unbidden through my mind,
I catch a glimpse of your eyes looking into mine –
Of what could have been.
And then it passes me by,
And I think of someone else instead.

It was never meant to be…
I smile,
And it becomes a fleeting memory.


Até said...

Yup, it is. Perfect. Absolutely incredible.

TheLadyLazarus said...

Brilliant picture. Perfect for the post.

Lúthien Táralóm said...

Thank you Ate and Theladylazarus. I've finally found out who you are Lady. Why didn't you tell me earlier? Anyway, I'll come and check the blog sometime.

feanaro said...

why is it perfect? please explain. lovely poem, by the way.

Lúthien Táralóm said...

I think it's perfect because I feel, the words, emotion and picture and the totality of it just fits perfectly. Like there isn't anything missing. It expresses what had to be expressed, and it should have been expressed.
However if you don't think it's perfect, do tell me why.

feanaro said...

i never said it isn't perfect. you don't have to get all defensive and all.
is this based on a real incident?

by the way, the comment was designed to piss you off. and partly to find out why you thought it was perfect. please understand that just because i ask you why you find it perfect, doesn't mean that i didn't.

Lúthien Táralóm said...

No this isn't based on a real incident. A Robbie Williams song inspired it. So do you think it's perfect or not?